I placed myself in the middle of the sea
Spoke your name
Let it flow from me, into the vastness of many waters
I returned to shore, to find your name shatterd upon sand
I picked up the pieces and held you alittle longer, before I returned you, to the vastness of the sea.
Reblogged this on mentalnotes1 and commented:
beautiful! Letting go isnt an easy task!
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Thank you!! No, it is hard!! Bit by bit
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Delightful Beth
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Thank you Michael
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Beautifully penned !
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Thank you 🙂 thanks for taking the time to read this
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My pleasure 🙂
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Wow. This is simply beautiful, bethtrem. I nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award. Yeay!! Here’s the link: https://geelayo.wordpress.com/2016/07/05/the-versatile-blogger-award/
I do look forward to your accepting it but it’s okay if you don’t want to.
Thanks!!
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Hi geelayo, I do appreciate that. It means a lot and I will definitely take a look at this today..thank you for the thought!!!
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You’re welcome dear.
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Oh my, what an incredible write–I’m otherwise speechless–“beautiful”.
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Thank you so much!! I really appreciate that!! I enjoyed your piece and I do appreciate you taking the time to read one of mine
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I may be hooked and have to follow–there’s something unique and magnificent in your writing that I don’t see often (I have to be careful of naming faves, as I love my little writing community–all are talented!).
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Aww that really means a lot to me. I’m so glad you enjoy these pieces.
There are so many talented writers so I do appreciate your comment 🙂
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You’re most welcome, Beth 🙂
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Amazing. I lost someone close to me this week, and this just moved me
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Thank you for commenting and I’m sorry for your loss. It’s my hope that anyone reading my pieces can relate to them no matter the circumstances they may be enduring. I try not to write for myself but for others also. I’m humbled that you could relate to this and moved by it.
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Beautiful 🙌
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Thank you!!
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Dear bethrem…everytime i read your post, i am left more than amzed at your deep understanding of emotions and their wonderful expression…
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Aww, that really means a lot to me. I get lost in the emotions sometimes and the words that craft what I’m feeling. I’m so glad that you take the time to read and comment. I do appreciate everything..thank you
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You are worth it!
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This is really beautiful!
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Thank you so much!! 🙂
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You are very welcome!
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Loved this…
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Thank you!! I feel this today and had to share
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